The given pie chart exhibits three different nutrient distribution(Sodium, Saturated fat and Added Sugar) in four types of meals consumed by people. However, over consumption may not prove to be beneficial in terms of health.
Overall, it is observed that dinner majorly contributes in providing nutrients such as sodium and saturated fat as opposed to snack meal which plays a key factor in fulfilling the requirement of added sugar.
During the lunch time, people usually intake sodium as the most consumed nutrient (29%) which is then followed by saturated fat and added sugar (26% and 19%) respectively.
Breakfast on the other hand account for the same amount of saturated fat as well as added sugar (16%) with a marginal decreased amount of sodium(14%)
Snacks provide the maximum amount of sugar intake(42%) and this concentration is greatly reduced in terms of saturated fat and sodium representing 16% and 14% each. Having dinner will provide people with 43% sodium and 37% of saturated fat. Sugar content in the same meal is significantly reduced to 23%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14450867052 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87132582821 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9297711246 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107316647154 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062858846087 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538743654528 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701255457632 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690474712399 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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