The charts below show the internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts given illustrate different purposes of Internet users in Australia, also the proportion of people using it that was based on intentions and age groups in two separate years, 2011 and 2012.
Overall, most people used the Internet to send and receive emails. It is worth noting that the purposes of paying bills online and emailing shared the same percentage by users’ age.
When it comes to the intentions of users, around 72% of people surfed the Internet to view and send emails, followed by the proportion of users making transactions online, at nearly 52%. Meanwhile, the figure for enjoying social media was the smallest, about 46%.
Regarding the percentage based on age brackets, almost all users whose age ranged from 18 to 25 surfed the Internet for social networking sites, while the figure for people being more than 65 years old was much less, just nearly 30%. In contrast, around 80% of people in the age group above 65 used the Internet for paying invoices online or emailings. Meanwhile, the proportion of users who were 18 to 25 years old was about 60% for each purpose. The figures of people in the age bracket ranging from 40 to 60 surfed the Internet for three given intentions had no significant difference, around 71% to 77%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88479262673 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47742895543 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6117493581 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15066826606 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718752756658 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600115863876 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120413556023 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640619007405 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.