The two bar graphs highlights the data of students from various age groups,who choose study for two chief reasons and the support given by employees to them.The data has been calibrated in percentage.
As it can be seen from the first chart that,80% of adults grouping under 26 age group choose study for their career while a negligible proportion select study as interest.However,opposite trend shows by senior age group,where 20% choose study for jobs and 70% for interest.Futhermore,same ratio of people,belonging to 26-29 age group doing study for their career while,it is comparatively low in next group 55%.Second last age group do study for career and interest equally(40%).
Shifting attention to futher data,60% of employers support under 26 age group whereas it is 30% in case of 30-39 age group.Even more,supporting from employees higher in other three groups ,which are 50%,40%,45% in case of 26-29 age group,40-49 age groups and last age group respectively.
Overall,it is evident that,majority of students choose study for their career and support given by employees to students is vary in all age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , who
...data of students from various age groups,who choose study for two chief reasons and ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... the support given by employees to them.The data has been calibrated in percentage....
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ble proportion select study as interest.However,opposite trend shows by senior age grou...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , opposite
...portion select study as interest.However,opposite trend shows by senior age group,where 2...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , where
...opposite trend shows by senior age group,where 20% choose study for jobs and 70% for i...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Futhermore
...ose study for jobs and 70% for interest.Futhermore,same ratio of people,belonging to 26-29...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , same
...for jobs and 70% for interest.Futhermore,same ratio of people,belonging to 26-29 age ...
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Suggestion: , belonging
...interest.Futhermore,same ratio of people,belonging to 26-29 age group doing study for thei...
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Suggestion: , it
...group doing study for their career while,it is comparatively low in next group 55%....
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Suggestion: Second
... is comparatively low in next group 55%.Second last age group do study for career and ...
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Suggestion: Even
...as it is 30% in case of 30-39 age group.Even more,supporting from employees higher i...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , supporting
...30% in case of 30-39 age group.Even more,supporting from employees higher in other three gr...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...m employees higher in other three groups ,which are 50%,40%,45% in case of 26-29 a...
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...nd last age group respectively. Overall,it is evident that,majority of students ch...
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Suggestion: , majority
...espectively. Overall,it is evident that,majority of students choose study for their care...
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Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...pport given by employees to students is vary in all age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29775280899 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53997229695 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.426024014 43.030603864 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.75 112.824112599 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5 22.9334400587 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260765757748 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161548771627 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316635027331 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161548771627 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316635027331 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.2329268293 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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