The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables illustrate the proportion of men and women employees in distinctive range of ages in 1984,2001 and 2014. Overall, men and women who are between 35-44 were employed mostly in 3 years while those from 60-64 accounted for the least.
According to the given tables, it is obvious that the percentage of 35-44 men peak the highest point for nearly 100% in succession. However, the propotion of male from 15-19 years old decreased after 2 initial years with same number. In constrast, the number of men between 60 and 64 followed the upward trend with approximately 10% increased in 2014.
Looking closer to the detail, the number of female workers who are 15-19 was a bit higher than 2 other age group. Unfortunately, this number reduced 30 years later. Contrary to it, the proportion of women employees from rose considerably from nearly 60% to under 80% after 30 years. The most dramatic improvement was workers from 60-64 with only under 20% in 1984 then increased to more than 40% in 2014. Nevertheless, this age group still accounted for lower percentage than others.
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion 84
- The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010 Summarize the information and compare where relevant by selecting and reporting the key features 73
- The plan shows the bookstore in 2000 and the bookstore in nowadays 84
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...he detail, the number of female workers who are 15-19 was a bit higher than 2 other age...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, nevertheless, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92896174863 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64326152639 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.422425152 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164447747698 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700616532966 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608148476817 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12881972655 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072358839725 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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