The charts display the quantity of oil production and consumption in million barrels per day in seven areas of the world in year 2005.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given pie charts depict the seven regions of the world and the amount of oil produced and used in these areas.
On of the pie chart display that almost 30% of the world's oil is produced by Middle East. And also, use and Canada produced nearly 20% of the world's oil. However, other areas like Latin America, Africa, Asia, pacific, Europe, Former soviet Union are produced nearly 10% of the world's oil.
Usa and Canada consume around 30% of the world's oil and they produce almost 20% of the world's oil.Thus, they consume more oil than they produce. Whereas, Middle East and former soviet union are consume less oil than they produce as they produce 29.80% and 11.70% respectively. Finally, other regions follow same pattern like Usa and Canada's trend as they consume more oil than they produce.
Overall, it is clearly visible from the pie charts that Usa, Canada, asia, pacific,europe use most of the world's oil. Whereas, other regions consume less oil than they produce.
- Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages? 56
- Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples. 56
- The charts display the quantity of oil production and consumption in million barrels per day in seven areas of the world in year 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 59
- In the past people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture These days most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
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Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...Middle East and former soviet union are consume less oil than they produce as they prod...
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Line 13, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , europe
...e charts that Usa, Canada, asia, pacific,europe use most of the worlds oil. Whereas, ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08778436085 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9059778516 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128426409259 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766795970019 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417550748042 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104398788158 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031965600379 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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