Young people are leaving their homes from
rural areas to study or work in the cities.
What are the reasons?
Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
In contemporary epoch, people is in the mad race of money because money is prime need of time so adolescents marching towards urban cities for study. And it has also some merits and demerits so reasons for my inclinations are articulated in ensuing paragraphs.
On the one hand, juveniles have cosmopolitan cognition in every aspects of life therefore they do their study in metro cities because metro cities give more opportunities to people to achieve their goals. For instance, many students come to Delhi for their study and they belong from rural areas in the different part of india. Moreover, students live alone in hostel so they can more foucs on their study without distract by their famioy or friends and can study well.
On the other hand, students live under stressby missing their family and friends so they addicted by alcohol, cigarettes and drugs. Also students have more freedom so they misuse their freedom and adopt bad habits therefore students can not focus on their goals.
In conclude, students have more to do study in metropolitan cities because its has numerous benifits so easily its advantages outweigh its disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...el so they can more foucs on their study without distract by their famioy or frie...
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Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...icted by alcohol, cigarettes and drugs. Also students have more freedom so they misu...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59832142704 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6458251889 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.875 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200497215525 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907341398722 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676554591229 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125532774375 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832962979433 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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