Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education.
Why do people do this? Would you consider doing this yourself and why?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
In recent years, many students travel abroad for their tertiary education because it has enormous benefits to students. People experience new culture and learn many things , which is very helpful in life such as cooking, household activities. Hence, i also like to do my graduation in foreign country because it enhance self-esteem and self-confidence. So some reasons for my inclinations are articulated in trailed paragraphs.
The prominent reason to support my notion is student do study without distract by their family and friends. People explore different country and their culture so it can be aid in person's growth. In addition, this exposure will enhance their world view and make them more tolerant towards other people. A foreign degree has tremendous value and they will get plenty of career opportunities. Another advantage is student can learn perfect English language.
However, people live independently without their family so they can learn myriad of life skills that could help in later life.students know about time management and money management by doing part-time job with study and manage their expenses. By this it is also true that, students broaden their view about different country's people. Also, students become more responsible while studying in a foreign country as well as people experience different style of education system with modern equipment s.
In a nutshell, study in a foreign country has better opportunity for future career and it expands the horizon for personal growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43277310924 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78911644302 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5775701818 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181903348607 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063325645344 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359460952399 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112810403324 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314475697748 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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