In the past, people wore their traditional clothes and
followed their culture. These days, most people
wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays,people change their dressing sense and adopt Western culture's dress so all people looks like same so that I think its positive trend. Some reasons for my inclinations are articulated in ensuring paragraphs.
First and foremost, the biggest reason support my notion is that when people wear similar clothes then they feel global unity and more tolerant towards each other even though their religions and countries are different. In addition, people wear western country's cloth like jeans and shirt and it is very comfortable and suitable in work time because some countries clothes not suitable in work time. For instance, indian traditional clothes not comfortable in work time. Moreover, people wear same kind of clothes then clothes company make in large. Number and its help in reducing cost of clothes. To exemplify, company like levies, make clothes in large measure and cut price for customer.
By this, it is also true that, equal clothes change humans attitude and bring them together. Beside this, some people think that this trend aloof value of traditional clothes and culture but, all culture have some traditions, which can never be forgotten. Likewise, this development also positive for cotton industry. By this trend, production is increase drastically in many country and aid in economy of that country.
Thus, to conclude, it can be said that in modern world, people must wear an equal type of clothes because its advantages easily outweigh its disadvantages. It is positive for human life and economy of country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
Nowadays,people change their dressing sense and adopt W...
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Line 9, column 372, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun country seems to be countable; consider using: 'many countries'.
Suggestion: many countries
..., production is increase drastically in many country and aid in economy of that country. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27419354839 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59956522019 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1773626614 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30049338942 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927190708339 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618723813677 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164047039606 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491039464778 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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