The civic center will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is existing and the other is the plan for new. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and compare the two maps.
The two given maps illustrate the development that is going to be made to the civic center. The first map displays its present status. The second one shows the suggested changes that need to be implemented.
Overall, the general structure will remain similar with some alterations planned.
The car park in the upper left corner will be demolished and replaced by a theatre. The car parking space in the upper-right corner is also planned to be converted into a hotel and restaurant. The library is going to be removed and the exhibition hall will be constructed there. Instead of locating in the lower central area, the council office will be shifted to the lower-left corner. In its old position, people are going to build an open park and underground car park. Lastly, most parts of the civic center will undergo modification except the shopping center and the concert hall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... first map displays its present status. The second one shows the suggested changes ...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... converted into a hotel and restaurant. The library is going to be removed and the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63408925381 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6784145703 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233694409978 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897235372354 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677235819963 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145845774672 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100297879185 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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