Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Globalization is the process in which economic activities of countries across the world become connected to each other. While globalization benefits the export and transportation industries, it widens the world’s income gap. In this essay, I will discuss the extent to which the economic advantages of globalization outweigh its disadvantages.
Globalization is beneficial for businesses worldwide in a number of ways. First, thanks to free trade agreements, such as NAFTA, products manufactured in a country can be sold in other countries without taxes. Second, global transportation systems allow businesses to deliver their goods to other parts of the world quickly and efficiently. Third, because the Internet, a product of globalization, is widely accessible, managing operations across continents is no longer a difficult task for multi-national companies.
However, the first negative effect of globalization is that it does not economically benefit members of the lower-class in developing countries. For example, although the rate of economic growth of China has increased significantly over the past few decades, due to its global exports, the income gap of China shows no sign of being shortened. Furthermore, despite its positive effects on the economy, globalization can cause detrimental consequences on the natural environment. Air pollution, for instance, is currently severe in Beijing due to China’s dream of catching up with developed economies in the world.
In conclusion, based on the analyses above, globalization poses both economic threats and opportunities. In my opinion, however, the economic advantages outweigh the disadvantages, because the monetary benefits can be used to effectively solve economic and environmental problems caused by globalization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93103448276 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47582861992 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1072743183 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150008648918 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576125166866 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418145946885 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932184266262 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414969165784 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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