The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy produced in France during a 10 year period from 1995.
Overall, there is upward trends in the amounts of Gas, Coal, Nuclear energy production except for Petro. In addition, Gas and Coal were the top produced energy in both periods respectively.
In 1995, the amount of Coal energy made occupied the highest percentage which was 29.80%. While 29.63% was the proportion of Gas energy production,
the figure for Nuclear was significantly lower at 6.40%. At the same time, the rate of Petro energy production was 29.27%. By contrast, other energy was least produced with only 4.90%.
After 10 years, the amount of Coal energy production
which increased slightly by over 1% remained the leading produced. It was then followed by Gas with 30.31%. At the same time, France saw a dramatic decrease in the quantity of Petro energy produced to 19.55%. By contrast, 10.10% and 9.10% were the rates of Nuclear and other energy respectively.
- Some people believe increasing business and cultural contacts between countries are a positive development while others argue that it is a threat to identity of a nation? Discuss both view and give your opinion? 56
- The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. 56
- Comparison of Energy Production. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in 2 years. 56
- Comparison of Energy Production. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in 2 years. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57762179951 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5712389531 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231370441421 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100376974259 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485247004899 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148247765522 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462602316638 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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