The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works.
The diagram illustrates the process of making a home smokery and the way of is used.
Overall, there are three main stages in this process, beginning with collecting the air and ending with smoked foods are done.
In the first step of the process, the air is collected by entering a chamber or box which is controlled by opening and closing a lid. After that, the air goes through an air pipe when it is brought into the second chamber which has a lid at ground level.
In the next step, the second chamber contains stones, fire, and logs inside which are burned to produce heat and smoke. Following this, heat and smoke come into the last box through another pipe at the base, passing some bricks which are placed on the top of this pipe’s mouth. The heat and smoke rise to the top of the box, where fish and meat are hung to be dried and smoked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41509433962 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05122100575 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2453847541 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0430953802115 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332828078293 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815258963888 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582449137012 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100883149813 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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