The diagram below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

Essay topics:

The diagram below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

The diagram illustrates the production of glass containers, such as bottles, and the process used to recycle them. Overall, the production system consists of 4 passages, while the recycling one uses 5 steps to create new glass products.
In regard to how glass is produced, 3 products (sand, soda ash, and limestone) are mixed together with other chemicals. Then, this mixture is melted inside of a glass furnace that burns at approximately 15000°C to get the molten glass. The molten glass does not have a shape, so, next, it is blown to give it a specific shape. Finally, glass containers are ready to be sold and used in everyday life.
When it comes to glass recycling though, the process is slightly different. In the first step, used containers are collected and then sorted by color by a machine. Afterward, all bottles and other containers are washed to remove impurities and other organic residues. The glass gets crushed and then sent to be melted inside the appropriate furnace, likewise during production. Ultimately, the recycled glass is molded into new pieces of glass furniture, bottles and containers.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, likewise, so, then, while, such as, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05405405405 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72704711642 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.2165103093 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208841648086 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824200201902 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846366820597 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146998001791 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427589920847 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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