The diagram below shows changes of a cinema from 1980 until now.
Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the development of a cinema which have taken place from 1980 until now.
Looking first as a whole, the main change is that the cinema has been renovated by opening more cinema rooms, a new relax room, and DVD shop. Additionally, the car park has disappeared so that the interior space has expanded.
In 1980, the car park was located along the Northern wall, while the entrance was in the middle of the Southern area of this movie theater. Meanwhile, to the right of the entry was Cinema 1, and the toilet was opposite this room. To the left of the entry was Moviegoers could purchase the ticket and beverages on the left of the entry doors, whereas Cinema 2 was situated in the Northeastern corner.
At present, we can see clearly that the car park has disappeared to provide more space for building more cinemas. The original/initial cinema 2 has been relocated to set up Cinemas 3,4,5 . The initial drinks shop has been converted to a new DVD shop. Moreover, the 1980 cinema 1 has been replaced by two entertainment areas, namely a food and drinks shop, and a relaxation/relaxing room. Finally, the old cinema 1 has been moved northward and the toilet now is between Cinemas 2 and 1.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65887850467 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73336455196 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2654281118 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158327597715 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666825875107 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674630770457 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11809629625 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654353319965 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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