The diagram illustrates the method for preparing weather forecasts by Australian Bureau of Meteorology. The bureau collates information on minute basis from three sources to predict close to accurate weather patterns.
To begin with, the data from space satellites, on-ground radar centers and the drifting buoy in the sea, is used for Analysis and Forecasting. These provide graphical information about developing weather conditions through satellite captured images, projection on radar screen and synoptic chart.
The information is analysed and weather forecast is prepared on a computer to be broadcasted further. The broadcasting is done on three different mediums of communication, namely, the TV, where a newsreader provides weather report, the radio and lastly through telephone which plays a recorded announcements in Australian homes.
To conclude, the Australian Bureau of Meteorology uses three distinctive sources of technology for forecasting the weather and disseminates it amongst the population via popular mediums of communication.
- “Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood”. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. 73
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 61
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 61
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 78
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'announcement'?
Suggestion: announcement
...hrough telephone which plays a recorded announcements in Australian homes. To conclude, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04635761589 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20436744195 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7093747362 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211300271655 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102157785076 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494620523965 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130561522591 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590974961494 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 61.2550243902 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.81 11.4140731707 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.06136585366 137% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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