the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram describes the process of producing instant noodles.
Overall, the process consists of eight steps to make instant noodles from three simple ingredients including flour, water and oil, starting with delivering the flour into the storage silos and ending with labeling the noodle cups.
In the first phase, flour is transported to storage silos. Water, oil and flour are mixed to create dough, which become dough sheets after going through a series of rollers. In the next operation, the dough is cut into strips shaped by a machine.
The shaping of dough into discs is preceded by cutting this dough into strips, which are then deeply fried in cooking oil. In the following stage, these noodle discs are dried to remove excessive oil. Vegetables and spice packs are subsequently added to the noodle cups after putting the noodle discs in the cups. Those cups go through the machine and are then labeled and sealed, which are the final stages of manufacturing noodles.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivering the flour into the storage silos and ending with labeling the noodle cups...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03680981595 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31290784515 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7529700087 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137756654825 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592636625441 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627652382783 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098174842563 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656233491299 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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