The diagram below shows how the orange juice is produced

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how the orange juice is produced.

The diagram depicts the linear process involved in the production of both fresh and concentrated orange juice, specifically for distribution and sale in supermarkets.

The entire process consists of 17 discrete steps, which are categorized into three main stages: the production and transportation of fresh orange juice to supermarkets, the processing of the fresh juice to create concentrated juice, and the eventual production of reconstituted orange juice, which is then made available to the general public.

The process begins with the delivery of fresh oranges to a factory, where the raw produce is carefully washed and the juice is extracted. The excess solid waste generated in the process is utilized as animal feed, further enhancing the sustainability of the entire process. The fresh orange juice may then be transported to supermarkets in refrigerated trucks, or processed further to create concentrated juice for storage. The evaporation process, necessary for the production of concentrated orange juice, is conducted at a separate facility, where water is extracted from the juice, resulting in a highly concentrated product. This concentrated juice is then canned and stored in a warehouse until it is required for further processing.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ce, which is then made available to the general public. The process begins with the deliv...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e available to the general public. The process begins with the delivery of fre...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ully washed and the juice is extracted. The excess solid waste generated in the pro...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e sustainability of the entire process. The fresh orange juice may then be transpor...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... create concentrated juice for storage. The evaporation process, necessary for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6335078534 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21423330563 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523560209424 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.927976771 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.714285714 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173140113518 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09453187887 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602892708813 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125783789788 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169195599205 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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