The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant
The diagram depicts a 7 step manufacturing process of how sugar cane is used for making sugar. The key elements in this process are harvesting, crushing, purifying juice, and evaporating,
Firstly, sugar cane is grown for 12 to 18 months which is named the growing process. Next, the fully grown sugar canes are harvested. it can be done in two ways namely, manual method: which involves humans harvesting the sugar cane directly, and by using machines: which involves machines controlled by humans to harvest the crops. Then, the harvested sugar cane is completely crushed in a crusher to extract sugarcane juice. When the juice is ready it is then purified using a limestone filter and is heated in an evaporator which converts the juice into syrup. Next, a process called centrifuge is performed on the extracted syrup which separates sugar crystals from the syrup. Finally, the sugar crystals are dried and cooled to get the final sugar.
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- The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... fully grown sugar canes are harvested. it can be done in two ways namely, manual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01910828025 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59469526281 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2467615494 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27940595227 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143799358888 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118153478638 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259441849974 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674981174316 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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