The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock.
The given figure depicts the information about various stages and different equipments of water clock. It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall, the process includes such objects and materials as a take one stand, two plastic bottels, one tape role, a tap for water, straw and glue for preparation the water clock. It involves seven stages that can be repeated again.
Firstly, we need water which is through into the tap and to fall ni plastic bottle which attach on the top of stand with the help of tape and give one small hole in bottom of the bottle. Secondly, after cover the hole with finger, and when fill the bottle to the overflow afterthat attach one straw with glue on the top.
Lastly, we need one more bottle which is cut frim ahead and it is just under to the first bottle for filling and its measuring as in per minute.
- The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock. 61
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- Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holidays for the year is better for children. Discuss both points and include your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeated'.
Suggestion: repeated
...k. It involves seven stages that can be repeated again. Firstly, we need water which is thr...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ondly, after cover the hole with finger, and when fill the bottle to the overflow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61842105263 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29954680589 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2349432579 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152799922649 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633930611091 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084891245458 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970829928575 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765765944646 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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