The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994
The given histograms depict the information about the count of marriage and divorce statistic by 8 distinct nations in the year 1981 and 1994. It is calibrated in number of thousands.
Overall, the marriage statistic was maximum than divorce statistic in the given year.
It is crystal clear seen that, in 1981 the divorce statistic of USA was near about 3 thousand, and it decreased to 4,500 people. Just under 3 thousand residents had been divorced in decreased by 500 people. The count of individuals who got divorce in Finland and Germany that were 2 thousand in during the year 1981. In Italy near about 500 people had took divorce in the year 1981 and 1994. It was observed that the number of divorce case was same in the year 1981 and 1994 in Denmark .
As far as trend was concerned, in the year 1981 the marriaze statistic of USA (10,000) and it was double than Denmark (5,000 people). In 1981 the count of people who got marriage did not cross to 6 thousand in Finland , Germany , Fernce and Italy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41984588257 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461111111111 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4857592746 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241403053177 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116282309288 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690692190853 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179819904659 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422897176172 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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