Visual pollution is the major cause of accidents on road. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Visual pollution is an aesthetic issue and reffers to impact of pollution that impare once abbilty to enjoy a vista or view : billboards, glasses bulding, electric wires and auto mobiles are the major reasons of visual pollution. I completely agree with this statement and through this essay I shall explore the dimentions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
To embark with, according to my first and farmost reason is bulding which are constructed by glass. It is very effected for driver who drive the car such as when sunlight is touch to glass bulding then light is come back and lighting in the eye it is aa major reason of accident.
Furthermore, second reason is a banners or adverisement board which is hang on the front of shops. According to this point America make a law, in this law amerian pernmet avoied to hang on the bill board frint of the shop on highway because in 2010, 48 cars were crashed with eah other because in that country speed limit was already se by government but when first car driver saw the bill board that time he payed just focus on boad and car was struck in another car and it was happend.
To conclussion, I bileave that govenment make a stricket law in all country for citizens, and who hang on the banners front of the shops,they want to punished them and receive fine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a banner' or simply 'banners'?
Suggestion: a banner; banners
...dent. Furthermore, second reason is a banners or adverisement board which is hang on ...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
... shops. According to this point America make a law, in this law amerian pernmet avoi...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in that country speed limit was already se by government but when first car driv...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...o hang on the banners front of the shops,they want to punished them and receive fine....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, second, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55833333333 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42242639786 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595833333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.850769012 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.285714286 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0664626324653 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312036250223 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532454524741 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0403857634123 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573607304776 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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