The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process of making bricks for industrial building are demonstrated by the diagram. Overall, clay ought to overcome seven important stages to become bricks; commencing with taking clay from minings and ending by transportation stage.
In the first stage, by using the digger, original clay is collected and ready to transit to the next step. Secondly, those clay is handled automatically by being run on the metal grid which crashes them into the smaller pieces. On the final stage of shaping, it is mixed with reasonable rate of sand and water, and the results are going to be put in the mould or cut by the wire cutter. And we obtain the basic ones for the next steps.
In the fourth stage, bricks are laid in the oven in order to drying around one to two days. After that, those bricks are moved to the heated term when they are heated with the former temperature about (200 to 980 degrees), then the high temperature up to 1300 degrees. In the flowing stages, the bricks are made cool and it will be packaged after that. Eventually, it is delivered to another place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this clay' or 'those clays'?
Suggestion: this clay; those clays
... to transit to the next step. Secondly, those clay is handled automatically by being run o...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will be packaged after that. Eventually, it is delivered to another place.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62827225131 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4128344818 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8712311737 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111436614514 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577770342119 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118193398278 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814726755222 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622223656002 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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