The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates, the process in which bricks are made for the building industry. It’s clear that there are seven consecu?ve steps in this process, beginning with the digging up of clay and culmina?ng in delivery.
First, the raw material, clay, which lies just beneath the soil’s surface in certain clay-rich areas, must be excavated by a digger. Then, lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid, in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller pieces, which fall through the metal grid into a roller, whose mo?on further segregates the clay par?cles. Following this, sand and water are added to form a homogeneous slurry, which is the either molded in molds or cut into brick shaped pieces using a wire cu?er. Next, the fresh bricks are placed in a drying oven for 24-48 hours, several dozen, if not hundreds of bricks at a ?me. In the subsequent stage, the bricks go through a hea?ng and a cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then high temperature (ranging from 200 Celsius to 1300 Celsius). Followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48-72 hours in a cooling chamber. Finally, a?er the bricks have cooled down and hardened they are packed and delivered to their des?na?on.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86976744186 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63185955067 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7671436331 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144233175689 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691420802575 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813847436426 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14179036556 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431234546092 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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