Transport preferences among young people from different countries

Essay topics:

Transport preferences among young people from different countries

A comparison of predilection transportations between youth from different countries; Great Britain, USA, Germany, and France.

Overall, The common preferences in these countries are cars, moreover in the second place in most countries are bicycles, and finally at the bottom out are motorcycles.

It’s obvious that cars are reached a pack above bicycles, and motorcycles, especially in France, there is a huge gap between cars and bicycles, cars are almost 85%, while bicycles are just around 15%, however in Great Britain and the USA are the same amount of preferences for cars, they are extremely different in second places. Moreover, the USA like in a really tiny percentage, which is one in ten. Great Britain like Germany, both prefer bicycles with a difference in percentages, in Great Britain near of 30%, on the other hand, Germany penchant bicycles in the first place with slightly under cars, bicycles are just over two-fifths, although cars are two fifth sharp.

In the bottom out Motorcycles are in the lowest place in Great Britain, France, and Germany, however, Motorcycles it’s by a large margin in the USA, climbing for the second place even above bicycles.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lly at the bottom out are motorcycles. It’s obvious that cars are reached a pac...
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...two-fifths, although cars are two fifth sharp. In the bottom out Motorcycles are ...
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... the second place even above bicycles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, while, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25654450262 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77101381889 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8128574707 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.333333333 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.6666666667 5.23603664747 395% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128834061869 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716333170671 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661695651883 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958441932484 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067762233925 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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