The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the main stages of brick manufacturing for the building industry.
It is clear that there are seven distinct stages in this process, from the initial digging of the clay to the eventual delivery to the purchasers.
At the first stage in the brick manufacturing process, the clay from the area is dug by excavators at fabrics. Then, this clay is placed on the metal grid and separated into small pieces of sand and water, which fall on the roller. Next, the mixture of water and sand is formed in molds, wire cutters, and bricks. The fourth step is to send the whole thing to the drying oven for 24 to 48 hours.
The drying process includes two temperature sets: the moderate, where the bricks are heated up from 200 to 980 degrees centigrade, and the high, where the temperature range varies from 870 to 1300 degrees centigrade. After this, the bricks are cooled for 48 to 72 hours. Finally, the commodities are packed and delivered to their customers.
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...to the drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. The drying process includes two temperat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77325581395 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52362418273 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5644382934 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167347172941 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648554050153 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064534411424 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109903906979 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688571233104 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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