Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
Persons considered as a second chance for criminals, but some of them don’t use this opportunity to stuck on the good track. This essay, will discuss the reasons for this behavior and think about some of the effects that can reflect on society.
In my opinion, there are a lot of reasons that come to mind when we say ‘criminal’, however, growing up in a toxic environment, needs, sometimes revenge. Raising a child in an environment that doesn’t fit him always came with a bad influence on his thoughts, ideas, and absolute doings, for sure this causes will make him a Sociopath, doing the crime without any feeling of guilt. On the other hand, needs make anyone able to steal, kill, or what is worse, in this case, the criminal just wants to shut up his hunger or thirst. Although, revenge is one of the most important reasons to make crimes, killing crimes specifically, eventually, revenge is the only motive can anybody make his crime, and takes it as a shield, when someone took his job, have an argument with colleagues, boss, maybe neighbors.
These reasons will affect society in every single way. Foremost, the government makes an issue for children called the ‘Children's Rights Protection Act’, which protects children from any abuse they can face, Then, have strict roles to follow in every job offer, the more this job is important, the more roles were firmed, Although in the last few years, had become companies just for security, and Insurance companies, a huge firms just for made security cameras and sell it, make security systems for the other companies, hotels, even shops, like; H&M, bath and body works, Carrefour, etc….
To summarize everything, the motivations of crimes are a lot, between physical problems and mental issues, In addition, these motivations make society in a condition instability, but society handled these issues in her own way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, then, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61661215873 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.058859378 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.555555556 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1111111111 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200596878534 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843106577416 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522816773814 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109754013982 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458359802685 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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