The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram in this task depicts all the stages as well as tools needed for making cement. The second diagram illustrates how cement can be utilized for producing concrete which can be used for building purposes.
Overall cements can be produced in different stages where the fundamental raw materials are passed through several stages. On the other hand, this cement is incorporated with several materials and then again goes to many stages to create concrete.
Firstly, the raw materials needed for producing cement are limestone and clay. Initially, they are crushed and then they are passed through a mixer to produce a powder. This powder is then heated up with the help of a rotating heater. The heated powder is again crushed using a grinder and finally, our desired cement is produced. In the end, this cement is sold after putting them into bags.
Secondly, in order to create concrete, various raw materials are needed. Concrete is originated using cement, water, sand and gravel. Gravels are basically nothing but small stones and they constitute half in proportion for making concrete. The second-highest proportion belongs to sand and they constitute one-fourth of the total proportion. Our desired cement is only used in 15% wheres the least constituent in water which is 1/10th in total proportion. All of these materials are then put into concrete and finally our coveted concrete is created.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 384, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: where's
... Our desired cement is only used in 15% wheres the least constituent in water which is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19913419913 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58958419256 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528138528139 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3099872256 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352100738482 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117984155826 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986293216623 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227280393546 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108032964161 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.