The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.
The diagram given depicts the process of recycling drinking cans made of aluminium.
It is clear from the diagram that there are several steps required to recycle aluminium cans. Additionally, the process commences with the collection of waste and ends with the production of new cans.
In the initial stage, waste cans are collected and delivered by a truck to a factory where it is deposited. Then, they are cleaned up by being watered to remove dusts. The subsequent step is called crush, at which the cans are crushed and the factory starts to process all of them by using chemicals to erase and sterilise.
The recycling continues with the stage at which the sterile cans are heated in high temperature to be changed them into the liquid state. Subsequently, after being fused, the aluminium is mounded to make special shapes and put on a scale in order to be weighted. During the next stage, the aluminium is brought into a machine called rolling where it is rolled. Finally, producers use the rolled material to manufacture new cans.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87640449438 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60395531062 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4492530658 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283571870996 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112713616817 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124515145445 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199974746116 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129973407341 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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