Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sports. Others think this has disadvantages. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is witnessed that numerous corporations prioritise to advertise themselves through sponsoring sports. Although some experts acknowledge that this proclivity might be fraught with plenty of pitfalls, I would align myself with the opinion that this inclination could be auspicious to some extent.
On the one hand, a vast array of factors has prevailed some individuals on advocating the former notion. Firstly, the sports aptitudes of accompanished players hired by firms for adverstisement purposes might be eroded. This is because they are prone to allocate their time and endeavors to advertising rather than practising. Ultimately, they gradually become less skillfull and the quality of their performances could decline. Moreover, the prestige of sports players would be influenced unfavorably if they disseminate misinformation relating to the functions of products via advertisement. This could be exemplified perfectly by the fact that last year, Tan Truong , a very reputable Vietnamese goalkeeper, was blamed for exaggerating the true quality of a new type of beverage which made purchasers endure from some disgestion-related illnesses. Consequently, he has to face with obstracles in gaining trust and empathy of football spectators.
On the other hand, there are a host of justifications convincing me to concede that this trend might have a great number of merits. The first reasons stems from the fact that in order to draw the attention of customers, corporations tend to spare their budgets for refurbishing sports factilities, which are used as the backgrounds of advertising programs. For instance, two years ago, Samsung, a well-known electric gadgets manufacturer, decided to devote a great deal of money to redecorate My Dinh stadium to make it more appealing to TV viewers. Accordingly, but for the aim of sponsoring sports to promote companies’ images, sports facilities in many nations would not be enhanced. Furthermore, companies have to pay money when employing sports players to advertise, which allows these amateurs to be sufficient in money to attend training courses to improve their skills. To illustrate, Nguyen Quang Hai has gained a large amount of money by promoting for the products of some famous television producers like Sony or LG. Hence, he could spend his budget purchasing specialised football facilities such as shoes or balls.
In conclusion, explicitly, it is indisputable that the sponsoring for advertisement of organizations might exert some ominous repercussions on the world of sports, I want to affirm that this tendency have a lot of benefits which could foster the development of this field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50487804878 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24447058122 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607317073171 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9717763382 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.764705882 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1176470588 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233773065638 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678843836172 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543752739314 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148387659552 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242823838685 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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