The diagram details the making of leather product.
The figure shows us the fundamental steps of producing any kind of leather products.
To get a leather bag, mainly, there is 8-10 steps followed to reach this bag to the final consumer.
First of all, and after the factory collects the animal skin from the fleshers, they keep it drying for a saficiant time in an open-air area, after that it bringed to the main hub of the factory to get limed in a huge sinks for two days, the next step is to flatted by a huge rolling machine, following, to make sure it's clean and empty from dust, they putts it again in a huge sinks but this time with a mix from water and some organic chemicals.
Eventually, and before backing it to another weaving industrial hub, it get polished to put a sense of luxury on it, once it delivered to this factory, the worker there are apple to make any type of leather products such as (bags, shoes or even balls …).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sink'?
Suggestion: sink
...b of the factory to get limed in a huge sinks for two days, the next step is to flatt...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'putt'
Suggestion: putt
...ure its clean and empty from dust, they putts it again in a huge sinks but this time ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sink'?
Suggestion: sink
...rom dust, they putts it again in a huge sinks but this time with a mix from water and...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...t to another weaving industrial hub, it get polished to put a sense of luxury on it...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24971653543 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.4735471 43.030603864 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.0 112.824112599 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127581356954 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807080215662 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464974190639 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807080215662 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464974190639 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.9 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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