News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
Nowadays, journalists have significant impact on humanity in all aspects of life. They determine what will they publish on T.V stations, or magazines based on some viewpoints, and standards. As we know what they post influence on our health. This what the essay will be about.
Reporters decided to spread their news depends on a number of features. First, they look for the human interest, and what people solicitous about like people's interest in football, political issues, or fashion. They also keep pace with trends, so they broadcast what the individuals preoccupied with. For example, lots of editors printed and wrote what are happening now between Russia and Ukraine. They also analyze and predict the outcome of the current situations.
Because of current political situations and epidemics that have spread in the recent period in the whole world like Corona Various, people used to hear a lot of shocking news. This news affects their health and people's relationships. If more benevolent news was reported, people will become healthier than the past. Our mental health is affected by the good news, and it can change our mood for the better and make our feelings perfect. It is wonderful for us to hear various good news so that we have a bright outlook on life.
To summarize, journalists have the ability to transfer our life, either making our life great, or making it a miserable one. Every editor decides what he will write about according to the place where he works and lives in, and the news that people excited for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98455598456 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51517064863 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7384159554 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269891519238 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920229203789 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559902152831 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15497940509 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031889388643 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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