The diagram shows the process of making leather products.
The diagram shows the process of making leather products.
It is obvious that the process done within around eleven stages as it identified in the diagram. The process begins with drying animal skin, and ends up with several leather products that can be sold to the final customer, and this step is after the final stage of manufacturing.
Initially, skins of animals are collected and dried out by particular machines. Then, the dried skin transported by trucks to the factory, and those trucks should have refrigerator in the back to maintain the dryness of the skin and to keep them cold as possible. After skins arrive to the factory, they should be washed and soak in tanks not only by water nor lime but water mixed with lime. At this point the skin gets out of the tank to pass through flattening machines.
Eventually, the flattened skin soak again in water that contains vegetable matter. The next step is that, the skin goes to the Polishing stage to be ready to be transported to the last factory. The final step the skin formed into its final shape (shirts, pants, dresses and shoes), after that the clothes reach to its final destination and shipped to distributers and retailers to reach the customers at the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77102803738 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45293277597 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546728971963 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4257717492 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163113215405 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101800651861 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21347424987 0.0843802449381 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231380274814 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.292929745168 0.0819641961636 357% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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