The diagram explains how recycled paper is made from old newspapers. Overall, the all process takes just above 24 hours with actual preparation.
Firstly, some old newspapers are seperated small pieces, and put in a bowl. Then, add 250 ml of water and leave your paper to soak for up to an hour. With using an electric mixer, beat the mixture for about 45 seconds. When the paper is ready like a pulp, the pulp poures into a shallow tray while add a further a 100 ml of water. It is mixed together by hand. Then, use a piece of mesh, to carefully lift the pulp mixture out of the tray, so you allow the water to drain.
Then, an old newspapers is opened and the pulp mixture is placed inside. Next, the rolling pin is used to press the paper and force out any excess water. Finally, the newspaper is left to dry in a warm place for at least 24 hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'newspaper'?
Suggestion: newspaper
...low the water to drain. Then, an old newspapers is opened and the pulp mixture is place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26380368098 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18680463104 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9201551754 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.1818181818 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932571770098 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394594239692 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624067287299 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823314652919 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06432216905 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 11.4140731707 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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