The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work
A snapshot of the planned proposal for exhibition hall with changes is presented in the picture. Overall, the latest development will be seen more in the main building. In any case, some rooms will be constructed to support the activities of the new development.
The most noticeable change from the existing to the proposed plan is that the permanent exhibition space will be extended when building work has been done. This will be achieved by removing the two temporary exhibition spaces and can be accessed by entering the main entrance which is projected to move from the East to the North of such space.
In order to provide a place for displaying a special wide range of stuff and marketing merchandises, there will be built a special exhibition space and an exhibition store on the left side of the main exhibition space. On the right side of the diagrams, an education area will be developed, replacing the lobby while the office will be demolished due to construction of a new store/plant.
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- Social media has completely changed the way family and friends communicate with each other What are the other reasons for this Is this a positive or negative development 91
- The number of French adults who parents spoke a regional language of French to them when they were children and the number who speak a French regional language to their own children 79
- The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87719298246 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85116357836 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1939090765 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108172562036 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679611920834 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893948902574 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858882888802 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502922378461 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.