Two diagrams illustrate the difference between the existing ground floor of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.
Overall, there are many changes, but the biggest change is the kitchen, doors, and stairs. the living room is mostly unchanged.
Looking at the two diagrams, we can see that in the proposed changes, the kitchen has kitchen furniture, that there is not in the existing floor plan. two doors in the existing floor plan are opposite the first entrance door, while those are next to the second entrance door of the existing floor plan. there are a small hall and storage under the stairs between the kitchen and stairs, but there are not those in the proposed changes.
There are two internal walls in the existing floor plan, but in the proposed change it has only one. the wall next to the living room will be destroyed. the stairs in the existing floor plan are straight, but in the proposed change they will have a curve shape.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: There
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...in the proposed change it has only one. the wall next to the living room will be de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22505664425 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479289940828 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4274207652 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424452217197 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174797427497 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196594101395 0.0843802449381 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28354491319 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234161854089 0.0819641961636 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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