Nowadays, when the economic condition of families is raised, parents have lots of good conditions to take care of their children. while some opinions are argued that the best way for child's development is teaching children at home, I tend to side with the view that going to school is the most important for children.
On the one hand, there are some advantages to people think that teaching children at home is the best way. children are taken care of by their parents or grandparents. the children are loved, and they are given the best conditions to develop. for example, my neighbor has a son, who is 4 years old, but does not go to school. at home, the boy is taken care of by his grandmother, who always gets him eating, sleeping, and playing. his grandmother makes a lot of good meals and milk for him.
On the other hand, I would argue that going to school for children is a great way for them to develop all sides. first, children could communicate with other kids, this is very important to develop their language and activity. my daughter is only over 2 ages, but she goes to kindergarten and she can talk very clearly. second, children are got eating and sleeping that follow the time table, this is a scient caring way. third, children are learned singing and lots of other subjects. all of these things help to develop all sides of children.
In conclusion, although there are many opinions that teaching kids at home are the best way, I personally believe that going to school is the greatest method to teach children, and they can develop all sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, third, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61071428571 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44811203809 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0227846612 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528130610205 0.244688304435 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171910952681 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160666261124 0.0667982634062 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341902424242 0.151304729494 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840084394245 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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