The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the life cycle of silkworm and the phases until produce the silk cloths.
Overall, it has noticed the life cycle starts with eggs and ends with cocoon. While, the silk cloth production begins with cocoon and ends with dye.
The first diagram explains the life cycle of silkworm, it starts with eggs when convert to silkworm larva. After 10 days. Then silkworm larva feeds on mulberry leaf to transfer to silk thread after 4-6 weeks, it stays 3-6 days until ends the life cycle at cocoon. In addition, it is worth to note that, the duration of second stage is more longer than other stages.
The second diagram gives information about producing the silk thread. At this point, the production begins with the output of previous diagram. Therefore, the cocoon puts in boil contains water. Obviously, it stays there until the length become 300-900m. Then passes to final step which forms dye.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...th eggs when convert to silkworm larva. After 10 days. Then silkworm larva feeds on m...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...e that, the duration of second stage is more longer than other stages. The second diagram ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13252573471 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.249892334 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220361627747 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775739387461 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698185845818 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1457269642 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453206013468 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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