The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworn and the stages in the production of silk cloth

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworn and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The flow charts given illustrate the circular rotation of the silkworn and how the silk cloth are produced.

From an overall perspective, it is evident that there are different steps in the life progression of the silkworm and 5 stages in the whole silk cloth producing process from the cocoon.

The silkworm eggs envolved to larve by 10 days. After eating mulberry leaf for their food, in 4-6 weeks later, the silk thread is weaved around the larve. In the next 3-4 days, it changes to coccoon. By 16 days, the moth gets out of the coccoon and breeds new eggs which starts the cycle again.

In order to produce silk cloth, the coccoons are selected and boiled in water. In the next stage, A length from 300 meters to 600 meters of thread is unwound. Some of these thread are twisted while others are weaved. Before the final production, both of them are dyed in colorful chemical substances.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
... in 4-6 weeks later, the silk thread is weaved around the larve. In the next 3-4 days,...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...ese thread are twisted while others are weaved. Before the final production, both of t...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67295597484 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28233439156 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6186483451 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194795672012 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603896361912 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656042814147 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11821290474 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519189170884 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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