The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
There are two diagrams. The first one illustrates the production of cement, and the other demonstrates the process of making concrete applying cement.
In general, there are four to five steps to create bags of cement out of two ingredients, whereas the process of making concrete is simpler with only one stage, using four ingredients.
To begin with, to produce cement, it requires the two ingredients including limestone and clay. The two components will then be crushed, and created powder. Such a mixture will go through a mixer in the next stage. The powder is transmitted into a rotating heater, where it will be rotated continuously with the heat, after it was mixed. The combination will go through a grinder before it is bagged.
It can be seen that according to the second diagram, in order to produce concrete, cement, water, sand and gravel have to be used in a suitable amount. Specifically, 50% gravel, which is small stones is in need. Besides, 10% of water, 15% of cement and 25% of sand is also used. The four components is then put into a concrete mixer to produce concrete.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, then, whereas, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6974580737 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6812009935 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26374656243 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081188360669 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894844905504 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172715047401 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707605270085 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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