The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams illustrate the process and equipment of manufacturing cement, and necessary stages to produce concrete.
Overall, the process of making cement consists of 4 main stages, and cement is mixed with 3 other materials for concrete manufacture. This process begins with limestone and close and end up with cement, after that concrete production starts.
Firstly, limestone and clay are collected, put into crusher and become powder. After that, powder is mixed and melted in a rotating heater. Undergo heat treatment, there is step of rubbing melted powder, which is cement. Subsequently, it is wrapped in bags.
In addition, concrete manufacture starts by putting cement with proportion of 15%, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel into concrete mixer. This machine blends all of these materials by twirling. Finally, concrete is produced completely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75901945728 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3417600014 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286495106826 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104727642004 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111102176713 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186323351368 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110113515339 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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