The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo

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The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo.

The given pictures describe steps of building an igloo.
In general, there are 13 stages to complete an igloo with the first stage of finding hard-packed snow and the final step is cutting ventilation in the walls or roof.
To commence with, it is important to find the hard-packed snow. Then, a snow saw is used to slice this snow into several large blocks which are located at the base of an igloo. Before being placed to form a circle, these snow blocks will be smoothed the edges by a snow saw. Next, a hole under the wall needs to be dug to create an entrance into the igloo. The last opening on top is filled with a large block.
In the next step, snow is thrown onto the igloo and packed into all crevices. Then, the inside of the igloo is smoothed by hand. After that, the entrance is built and the hole is covered with snow blocks. Finally, to complete the igloo, ventilation holes must be cut in the walls or roof.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34482758621 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16617116807 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6768288754 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7272727273 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170661062394 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808749536508 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857109157616 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149983809056 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890933407233 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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