The education of young people is the main priority in the country around the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for the society and more funding should be more available for it. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that society should be focused on funding and educating to illiterate people on a top priority. In my opinion, while I agree that funding and educating to adults are responsibility of society.
Firstly, education is the most essential and powerful weapon in the world that encourage the creditability of the country, with these all, government and society are responsible to provide education to illiterate people that eventually will contribute the economical growth of the country. However, one of the most noticeable thing was found that illiteracy rate among young people has been increased in last couple of months. 2nd, many youngsters start doing job at early age on account of inadequacy of money as well as knowledge that impact on their future.
Furthermore, reducing illiteracy requires more and more funds to provide better education system, hence government should also form the criteria of those people who are not able to bear the cost of education, as well as societies are also responsible to contribute their efforts in fund-raising for these people.
In conclusion, societies and government ought to consider and cater about the education system among young people to reduce illiteracy rate of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ple that eventually will contribute the economical growth of the country. However, one of ...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reduce illiteracy rate of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86223688747 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4938067155 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.571428571 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1428571429 5.23603664747 308% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322540870245 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142814560268 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846810061141 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195253102724 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585602708635 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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