Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the
the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products.
Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking has become increasingly popular among certain demographics of society. There are widely differing views on the issue of whether tobacco should be prohibited or not. Some people suggest that smoking is a personal choice and if introducing laws to prevent people from smoking, it would be a violation of their civil liberties. This essay will argue why smoking is a majority of serious disease and increasing death rate around the world.
One of the main reason which I believe to be absolutely pivortal is the fact that tobacco is a drug. Almost governments around the world take a prohibitionist approach against some vital problem of addiction to some drugs. If the government wish to be persistent in pursuing on addictive drugs, I am convinced that they must ban tobacco as well. On the whole, there are considerable young people would like to use some drugs which make calmness in stressful times. So, which drug is accessible? It is a tobacco product! As a result, Their accessibility makes them more dangerous than some other drugs because I would be more consumers in using cigarettes.
However, of course, there is so strong argument in favor of banning cigarettes and other tobacco products is that of public health. It is an irrefutable fact that smoking leads to lung cancer and other such fatal diseases. To prove, each individual uses tobacco products not only will they injure their body but also can impact upon public health especially their family. I would like to point out that children who live with their smoked parents are harmed rather than other ages in our societies. The medical treatment that smoked people require is often so costly. As a result, I feel that laws prohibiting smoking would be entirely justified.
To conclude, absolutely the widespread prohibiting smoking is probably in the near future. Nevertheless, there is incredibly seriousness of problems that tobacco has with itself or the government and society. This should be the ultimate goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, i feel, of course, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07598784195 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74560803224 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6256311603 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8947368421 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206160704572 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062616175863 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504303056472 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126808183889 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332814342521 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.