The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The pie charts compare the percentage of using energy in an average Australian household in different types of activities and also shows the greenhouse gas emissions from using that energy by the same activites.
In general terms, water heating, other appliances and heating are popular activities what accounted the highest proportion than other activities in Australian household energy use and greenhouse gas emissions.
It is clear from the pie charts show that the most bigger different energy are using heating and water heating (42% and 30% respectively) but the percentage of greenhouse as emissions had changed for both activities ( 15% and 32% respectively). Other appliances, accounted the highest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions of Australian household ( 28%) while they only used 15% energy.
In contracst, cooling had the lowest percentage for using energy and greenhouse gas emissions (2% and 3% respectively). On the other hand, using energy of lighting and refrigeration are similar change in greenhouse gas emissions. The former using 4% energy lighting and produced bouble the percentage of its emissions to 8%. The refrigration have the same situation about 7% in using energy but to 14% in greenhouse emissions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
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Suggestion:
...e of greenhouse as emissions had changed for both activities 15% and 32% respect...
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Suggestion:
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...se gas emissions of Australian household 28% while they only used 15% energy. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4554973822 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99794800211 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48167539267 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.577353362 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468153458087 0.215688989381 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244175735887 0.103423049105 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113112562893 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333755799202 0.15604864568 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130508873251 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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