The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross section of 100000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98.The second chart shows their destinations over the same period
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information
The first chart illustrates a survery conducted amongst 100,000 people asking if they had foreign visits from 1994 -98 and specifying the purpose of visit.
Overall,1995 and 1998 were the years which had the highest number of travellers abroad with holidays and buismess being the most mentioned purpose of visit.
While Western Europe was the most preferred destination and North America had the least travellers from united kingdom.
In 1994 and 1995 there were 22012 and 21020 travellers from uk respectively with holiday beinh the topmost purpose of visit with huge numbers of 15,246 and 14898 visitors in the aforementioned period.In the 1998 the numbers were at an all time high with 28,828 travellers and holiday and buisness were the most mentioned reasons with 20 700 and 3957 respectively.
The most preferred location amongst the visitors was wester europe with a steady increase in the travellers from 19371 in 1994 to 24519 in 1998.North america had the least travellers from uk with 1995 being year with least number of visitors with numbers of 914 and 1998 being the highest with 1823 visitors
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...travellers from uk with 1995 being year with least number of visitors with numbers of 914 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14835164835 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55496868712 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.3439671178 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.4 112.824112599 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124400429222 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847559741769 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450584533425 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847559741769 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450584533425 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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