The following diagrams show the present and future water supply system of a city
The flowchart illustrates the various stages of a water supply structure in a city.
Overall, there are five main steps at present, while there are four stages in the innovative future.
First of all, water is stored in dams or storage after channeling through the pipe systems into the city. This water is used by households, industrial manufacturing of factories or shop’s activities.Following that, waste water from the city is transferred at the water treatment plant, a modern treatment is operated after releasing pure water into the river. Moreover, toxic water from factories and stormwater run directly to the river.
However, there will be a reconstruction of water travels in the future. Meanwhile the first step will remains unchanged, the wastewater after undergoing a treatment progress which will be flowed into the city for reusable purposes. Finally, a great deal of excess water from treatment plant directed straight into the river.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Following
...uring of factories or shop’s activities.Following that, waste water from the city is tran...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ruction of water travels in the future. Meanwhile the first step will remains unchanged, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...e future. Meanwhile the first step will remains unchanged, the wastewater after undergo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, moreover, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35099337748 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99844264652 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.720095071 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214773276418 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872067442176 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488458617634 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116070180221 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569907911768 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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