The given bar chart illustrates the various percentage of Australian men and women among various age groups who did physical activity regularly in 2010.
Overall, men of age groups 15-24 had the highest percentage that is 52.8% of doing regular physical activity whereas 53.3% women preferred to exercise at the age group of 45-54. The percentage of women slightly decreased at the age groups of 35-44 and 55-64 that is 52.5 and 53 respectively. Being the oldest age group of 65 and over, 47.1% of women were interested in doing regular physical activity. Only 47.7% of women of age group 15-24 and 48.9% of age group 25-34 did physical exercise daily though they were the most energetic group. Similarly, men of age group 35-44 did the least physical exercise that is 39.5%. The percentage of men from age groups 25-34 was slightly less than that of age group 45-54 that is 43.1%. Though 65 and over was the oldest age group, 46.7% men preferred doing exercises regularly which is higher as compared to the age group 55-64 that is 45.1%.
In conclusion, population of men doing regular exercise was higher than that of women only form age group 15-24. In other age groups, women had the higher percentage of doing physical exercise regularly.
- Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English Should we try to ensure the survival of local lang 67
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Formal examination are the only way to assess a student s performance Continual assessment such as course work and project is not a satisfactory way to do this To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Many people believe that all zoos should be closed while others claim that zoos have a positive impact Discuss both views and give your opinions 82
- Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a students performance Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 836, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ing exercises regularly which is higher as compared to the age group 55-64 that is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77248677249 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36630414649 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42328042328 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4919951475 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310373788051 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180528196213 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368981726146 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252795846888 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560911997256 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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