The given bar chart illustrates the various percentage of Australian men and women among various age groups who did physical activity regularly in 2010.
Overall, men of age groups 15-24 had the highest percentage that is 52.8% of doing regular physical activity whereas 53.3% women preferred to exercise at the age group of 45-54. The percentage of women slightly decreased at the age groups of 35-44 and 55-64 that is 52.5 and 53 respectively. Being the oldest age group of 65 and over, 47.1% of women were interested in doing regular physical activity. Only 47.7% of women of age group 15-24 and 48.9% of age group 25-34 did physical exercise daily though they were the most energetic group. Similarly, men of age group 35-44 did the least physical exercise that is 39.5%. The percentage of men from age groups 25-34 was slightly less than that of age group 45-54 that is 43.1%. Though 65 and over was the oldest age group, 46.7% men preferred doing exercises regularly which is higher as compared to the age group 55-64 that is 45.1%.
In conclusion, population of men doing regular exercise was higher than that of women only form age group 15-24. In other age groups, women had the higher percentage of doing physical exercise regularly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 836, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ing exercises regularly which is higher as compared to the age group 55-64 that is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77248677249 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36630414649 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42328042328 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4919951475 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310373788051 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180528196213 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368981726146 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252795846888 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560911997256 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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