The given scheme describes the production process of instant noodles

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The given scheme describes the production process of instant noodles

The given scheme describes the production process of instant noodles. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there are eight main stages conducting to produce this kind of fast food, which consist of storage silos in the beginning and ending with labeling and sealing products.
At the first stage, storage silos are designed to contain flour before being mixed with water and oil in a special machine. After that, this mixture is transformed into dough sheets and converted into dough strips through a machine by means of rollers at the fourth step. Then, the dough strips are cut into noodles discs in preparation for cooking and drying stage. At this stage, the round-shape figures are cooked in oil and dried.
The following operation witnessed adding vegetables and spices to cups. The final part of production process is mainly about packaging. All of them are placed into cups before labelling and sealing are conducted to finish the manufacturing process.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09375 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43701116893 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3836456654 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202072138738 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115304074514 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231308895676 0.0843802449381 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141441658437 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106700642509 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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