Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some hold the opinion that government authorities should allocate funds on operating trains instead of roadway transportation. I partially agree with this statement as railway can transport maximum people and even cargos, and offers cheaper modes of transportation. Likewise, roads provide access to every shorter-distance region where railway is not possible.
Investment in railways seems to be expensive, however, in long run it is far more beneficial. This mode not only provides faster approach to transportation but also is cheaper. Having capacity to hold greater number of people and cargo, it equips people and even business to expand in their services, which results in balanced development of a nation. For instance, if not for trains, India - having highest rail network would not be able to speed up its development in this shorter span of time.
Similarly, roadway also has its own importance without which there would not be access to transportation where railway could not be constructed. It is not even possible to connect every house with rail networks, for this roadways would be major source of transportation. So, short distance travelling that requires frequent movement must be covered by roadways. Feasible access to roadways also develops every corner because with this medium other developmental of infrastructures is possible.
To conclude, railway is faster and is reliably cheaper to transfer people and product, whereas, roadway can provide access to every corner where trains lack services. I believe, governments should balance the investment in these networks as they have unique and are more important in the development of any region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the highest'.
Suggestion: having the highest
...or instance, if not for trains, India - having highest rail network would not be able to speed...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ect every house with rail networks, for this roadways would be major source of trans...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47876447876 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02995645095 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4041000457 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139539608785 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538411881177 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444874179062 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966037980898 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621892903301 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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