New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, the rise of cutting-edge technology has had a huge effect on how children spend their leisure time. Personally, I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
The new technologies bring to children more flexible and more efficient ways to entertain than do traditional activities. For instance, modern kids might prefer to play video games rather than play physical games like hide and seek or blind man’s bluff. It can be explained that video games permit children to roleplay in various scenarios, which respond to their imagination and also give them a sense of winning. Moreover, physical games require abundant stamina and some special equipments for each game while video games require only the computer - the normal device easily seen in modern families. Additionally, the advantage of video games is that the games do not require the player to gather in one particular place like team physical activities allow children bonding with each other easily and prevent the isolation of a young in some cases.
Modern devices also help children access knowledge and information easily with the rise of the internet. Nowadays, children can satisfy their curiosity without effort by surfing the internet instead of going to the library, searching for a suitable book or asking their teachers or professions. Consequently, with their enthusiasm for new information, children tend to spend their free time to grow their passion, enhance their special skills, become more potential and talented. Late technologies change the young's habit that they spend more time being domestic and avoid the risks from the foreign. The collection from MIT university pointed out that the number of kidnappings declined to 50% in the last decade thanks to the habits’ changing.
In conclusion, the appearance of new technologies bring to the young the advantages that outweigh the disadvantages such as its’ flexibility and convenience, the children can access to their passion easier with the internet and its’ emerging change the childrens’ habit which tackle the problem of kidnappings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41515151515 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77599613874 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.699553657 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.461538462 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307380393704 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103635141806 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876951686568 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196345234893 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574174108114 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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